Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

I'm writing an essay for a contest on fashion trends, and why it's best to be unique, and stuff, and I was wondering what you guys' opinion is on this piece:



Beauty and fashion are two completely different things. The majority of the world is always thinking that high fashion and expensive materials are what makes girls pretty. But it鈥檚 not the case, because we鈥檙e meant to be unique, not giving off the effect of just getting popped out of a mold. Long flowing blonde hair, tan flawless skin, five feet ten inches of toothpick thin right-off-the-runway looks...that鈥檚 not what real beauty is. (The following is an edited quotation of Natalie Lloyd, a Brio Magazine writer): 鈥淵ou and I live in a world where beauty has become a sad plastic imitation of the real thing. Real beauty is a thousand skin tomes and languages, different smiles, personalities and hair types. Real beauty doesn鈥檛 matter if you鈥檙e wearing a frilly skirt and ballet flats or polos and converse. -see next detail



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

i agree, and i think this is written very well, beauty is natural and fashion is manmade (not that there is anything wrong with fashion = ))



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

that was wonderful鈥揳nd so true!!



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

It's very good



Good Luck!



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

that was beautiful!



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

it was GREATTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

i think you could win a beauty pageant with that! and that's coming from the heart!



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

That was so good it's telling people the truth about Beauty and fashion and that everyone is unique your essay is so good



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

2 thumbs up!!!



Opinions on an essay?!?!?!?!?

I loved it...Yeah!!encore!! it was truly...."beautiful"!



Good job hope you win.

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